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  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "My dreams...ah, I always forget them as soon as I wake up, but they leave me feeling like they're trying to tell me something important." -- Felix "I had many ...

    Nov 25, 2006
  • Lyrics Re: Twelve Days of Christmas for the Paranoid Caroler

    Disclaimer (just in case): I do not own, nor claim to own, the song "Twelve Days of Christmas." I am not making money off of this endeavor. _________________________________ On the ...

    Nov 25, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: These (Revamped.)

    I have to say, this really spoke to me. I can't even count how many times people have called me weird, even a teacher did once. ("Everyone in here watches ...

    Nov 24, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Do you love me?

    I like what you've got so far as well, but I just thought I should point out that there's a kds' series out entitled "Dear Dumb Diary", so I'd recommend ...

    Nov 24, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: james in love

    Um...I tried to think of a way to say this nicely, but I really can't. Your grammar is atrocious. My parents started to cry as shabby camper van drove off. ...

    Nov 24, 2006
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Hunted

    This was pretty good. I couldn't write like this when I was twelve. Really, all I've got to say is I think your lions behave more like wolves. I don't ...

    Nov 24, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 18 Years Ago

    Jiggity's right, the plot is okay. However, I think you should take the poll down because it looks...I dunno. I just don't think you should have a poll up there ...

    Nov 23, 2006
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lemon Drop's Triumph: A Prologue

    Please don't read this without listening to this song ( ) either before or after. Music is my main inspiration, and this song is where this scene originated from, particularly ...

    Nov 22, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Immortality's Price.

    I love vampire stories, but I'm very particular of them. Your style of writing is very easy to get into, but the overall plot is very cliched. I find that ...

    Nov 21, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What are you listening to at the moment?

    Der Ring Der Nibelungen by E Nomine.

    Nov 21, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "*cough* Probably go to the local gay bar with Kanta and Stine...just for fun though! I mean, I don't swing that way, they do!" -- Felix "We're gonna start a ...

    Nov 20, 2006
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Silent

    It's okay, but I think some parts require a bit more description. Like maybe giving us some idea of why Jeffery's jumping off a bridge. I mean besides the fact ...

    Nov 19, 2006
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    6, because I don't get what those signs are and I had to squint to read the sentance below that one.

    Nov 19, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique Circle

    Someone post the URL! I'm sooooo going there! *prepares to annoy the ass off some people*

    Nov 18, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Mock You!

    Wow, really? *rereads poem* Huh. Well, I don't blame you for thinking that. Poetry is not my specialty, but when I do write it, it usually comes out hateful and ...

    Nov 18, 2006


An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
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