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Re: Character Answer Game
"My dreams...ah, I always forget them as soon as I wake up, but they leave me feeling like they're trying to tell me something important." -- Felix "I had many ...
Nov 25, 2006 -
Re: Twelve Days of Christmas for the Paranoid Caroler
Disclaimer (just in case): I do not own, nor claim to own, the song "Twelve Days of Christmas." I am not making money off of this endeavor. _________________________________ On the ...
Nov 25, 2006 -
Re: These (Revamped.)
I have to say, this really spoke to me. I can't even count how many times people have called me weird, even a teacher did once. ("Everyone in here watches ...
Nov 24, 2006 -
Re: Do you love me?
I like what you've got so far as well, but I just thought I should point out that there's a kds' series out entitled "Dear Dumb Diary", so I'd recommend ...
Nov 24, 2006 -
Re: james in love
Um...I tried to think of a way to say this nicely, but I really can't. Your grammar is atrocious. My parents started to cry as shabby camper van drove off. ...
Nov 24, 2006 -
Re: Hunted
This was pretty good. I couldn't write like this when I was twelve. Really, all I've got to say is I think your lions behave more like wolves. I don't ...
Nov 24, 2006 -
Re: 18 Years Ago
Jiggity's right, the plot is okay. However, I think you should take the poll down because it looks...I dunno. I just don't think you should have a poll up there ...
Nov 23, 2006 -
Re: Lemon Drop's Triumph: A Prologue
Please don't read this without listening to this song ( ) either before or after. Music is my main inspiration, and this song is where this scene originated from, particularly ...
Nov 22, 2006 -
Re: Immortality's Price.
I love vampire stories, but I'm very particular of them. Your style of writing is very easy to get into, but the overall plot is very cliched. I find that ...
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
Der Ring Der Nibelungen by E Nomine.
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"*cough* Probably go to the local gay bar with Kanta and Stine...just for fun though! I mean, I don't swing that way, they do!" -- Felix "We're gonna start a ...
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: The Silent
It's okay, but I think some parts require a bit more description. Like maybe giving us some idea of why Jeffery's jumping off a bridge. I mean besides the fact ...
Nov 19, 2006 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
6, because I don't get what those signs are and I had to squint to read the sentance below that one.
Nov 19, 2006 -
Re: Critique Circle
Someone post the URL! I'm sooooo going there! *prepares to annoy the ass off some people*
Nov 18, 2006 -
Re: I Mock You!
Wow, really? *rereads poem* Huh. Well, I don't blame you for thinking that. Poetry is not my specialty, but when I do write it, it usually comes out hateful and ...
Nov 18, 2006
