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Lwis

Caerulean

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: As if I Never Existed

    That was a nice poem. ^_^ :D I like the simplicity of it and how it is direct to the point. And you did a good job making me feel ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Move With Godspeed

    So...this is the result of me wanting to write something even though I'm not inspired. >.< I hope it makes sense though. :D - - - - - - - ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]

    That is really a great song! (I didn't read the lyrics though xD. I just watched the vid) The video is great too! There's so much effort that's put into ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Piano Boy

    Hi there! :D That is really a beautiful poem! ^_^ Nitpicks: Sing the chorus to your song, piano boy, - Perhaps, it is more correct if you used 'of' instead ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The Answer

    UPDATE: I recorded the song now. :D - "The Answer" It couldn't be just a greeting card for you You know it has something that I wanted to tell you ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: The difference of wings

    Hi, Pink! :D Nice drawing you've got there! Anyway, can you believe that I've got nitpicks for you? Haha! :D (Well, I couldn't actually lol.) Here we go: Lower Angel ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mr.Silence Must Die

    (OMG! WHERE DID MY REVIEW GO!? DARN THIS INTERNET CONNECTION! >.< Good thing my browser remembered most of my review!) Hi, Sol! ^_^ :D Nitpicks: So listen what I'm going ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Face of Fear

    Hi! :D I'm sick of this now,how much shall I endure? - You forgot to put a space after the comma here. These people they watch, they point, and they ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Other Re: Trying to Define Art

    This is something a poor reader like me wouldn't understand. >.< It's rather exaggerated and quick. It's like an explosion to me, as simple as that - a quick literary ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Is this love?

    Hi there. :) You write poems fast xD. Nitpicks: You are struck from behind, by none other than cupid. - I don't think there should be a comma after 'behind'. ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: To The Shore

    Another great story by Pink! I mean, dad. XD :D Nitpicks: If evening tides could wash away all your worries, would you let me take your hand and walk you ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Corazón

    Oh my gosh. I love this! This is what I call poetry! xD It's so beautiful! :D And I can feel the words just by reading it! Yet, you didn't ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Begin.

    For me, this is high poetry - I can't understand it It's filled with really poetic, beautiful words...Fine, I simply didn't understand it. lol I don't have the best vocabulary ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Heart Cloud on Valentine's Day

    I agree. It looks like a broken heart too, but it was most probably because it took me several seconds to take the shot and it was already deforming.

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH

    FINALLY! I'M DONE READING THIS! :D Sorry for the major delay, twin. :) Nitpicks! : Next to it were two wooden doors – like wardrobe doors because of their flowery ...

    Feb 15, 2011


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien