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This totally makes no sense at all! xD But, it was interesting to read. :) I love the part where 'Skins' appeared XD. Okay, this comment also made no sense, ...

I originally meant this to be a poem but then, you can give it a tune so I added it to the Lyrics forum. xD I hope you like it! ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. I agree that this story needs a lot of development to make it 'beautiful' and all but, I actually just wanted it to be plain ...

His mouth forms and “o”, - Typo: 'an' That's only mistake I caught. Anyway, the suicide of the mother was, like what the others said, fast. That part of the ...

This is one of my scrap stories so sorry for all of the errors and problems you find xD. I'll use your tips on my 'real' stories. ;) - - ...

Ooh. o.o I was confused reading this poem until the last parts xD. I thought 'good enough to eat' and 'pea' were just figures of speech, but then, they were ...

o.O This is just epic! I love it. It's so wonderfully written, and totally realistic. (The title has typo though) I love the way you wrote it. There were only ...

Aw, I like mushrooms, and eggs, and omelettes. xD

Hey there. :) This story is nice. It caught me with its 'darkness' xD. However, the shortness is flawed too. As a story, I see no plot. I didn't get ...

Wow, I'm first! :D So, let me greet you with my nitpicks XD: “I’m working on getting my surgeons degree the University of Chicago..." - I think you missed a ...

I'm not good at reviewing poems nor making one so I'm sorry that this one wouldn't be a helpful review. Anyway, this poem is so epically done. :D I can ...

Wow, that is deep. I like it. :) Anyway, like what the other reviewer said: Adrenalin pulsing in my veins -- - Should be: 'Adrenaline'. 'Adrenalin' refers to some chemical, ...

Hello. :) I'm not really good with understanding (nor writing) poems so this comment may not be helpful at all >..

Nice! :D I can never write a song like that! lol I'm so limited >.

Hi. :) I've got nitpicks for you: ...watching my fingers hold the wooden writing utensil while not really watching it. - Huh? What did you mean by that? o.o Why ...