Lwis

Hi there! :D First of all, congrats on the featured work! Realistic works like this deserve to get featured! :D Well, maybe, not all lol. Anyway... Nitpicks: I met Michal ...

Hello. :) (Uh...I don't know what else to say to begin this review. :lol:) Nitpicks: Today I need your company. - Comma after 'Today' A minute ago I wanted to ...

OMG! Haha! :D Well, I've got some nitpicks for you: 7. Nitrogen Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom! BOOM! - ...

Hey. :D I'm so sorry that I'm only able to review this late. >.< :( I was supposed to read and review it the day I read the update in ...

Probably, it's just me but, the first time I read this, I was confused and didn't get to relate the poem with the title until the last time. o.o Stupid ...

Nice! I like it. I like how realistic it is for writers or just people who are trying to write something, like homework or a school project or something. :) ...

Ooh. This poem is interesting. :) Anyway, I've got only one nitpick for you: you - I think you should capitalize this...and also, to give more power to the word ...

This is SO much better than what I did. I'm so ashamed of what I (originally) wrote in my poem. T_T This deserves to get featured! It's very sympathetic. :) ...

I love reading featured works...'CAUSE HEY HARDLY EVER DISAPPOINT ME! :D ^_^ Nitpicks: For when I need a wish, I’ll have my fallen star. - Ooh, I love it! :D ...

First of all: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WORKS BEING FEATURED! :D You're making a feature spree! XD Anyway, nitpicks: all of it's secrets. as all gaze up at it's glory, it's ...

Awesome job, man! Keep it up! :D I love how simple the words and yet, they show how deep the emotion is in the poem. My only problem is that ...

Hello. :) Nitpicks: Wandering through an empty land, there's nothing here, silence is so quiet it sounds loud. - o.o Please rewrite this sentence. My heart bounces out of control.Oh, ...

Hi! is this the first time I reviewed a work of yours? XD :D I didn't know you are a poet, haha. Nitpicks: The demon wailed, “He has a plan! ...

Hello! ^_^ Nitpicks: There's more to tears than sadness, and there's more to life than death. - Cliché. But it doesn't matter 'cause it works here! :D So don't cry, ...

Hello! ^_^ :D Nitpicks: Is there a blatant reason for your cruel, menacing lies? - Ooh, I love it! I love the emotion you put in these lines and how ...