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This is totally brilliant! Amazing! I can't say anything else! :D :smt023 The title is catchy by the way. I've only one nitpick: Next time LISTEN - You should put ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to the public, you’re impulsive and obscene. - Nice beginning. It's engaging. but you're now ...

Hello. :) Nitpicks: You knew you were in trouble when you stopped sweating. - I like this starting sentence. It pretty much makes the reader interested. You had finished off ...

Nitpicks: CLEVER BOOTS: There is a lot that you can do. There is the mall, the movies, go see a show. Look at me; I’m going to a modeling show ...

I'm in the same page is the reviewers above. I didn't get it! XD But the wording is great. :) The problem with that though is I couldn't be sure ...

RH! :D xD This is like the first time I read a work of yours and you impressed me! *standing o* :smt023 First, nitpicks: I am sitting right now in ...

Hi there. :) Nitpicks: Its just writing, they say Its much more than that - Correction: 'It's' That's much better, I murmmer - Correction: 'murmur' - Also, it's more correct ...

Hello. ^_^ :D First of all, it's the title that made me click that link. XD Nice title. :) Nitpicks: Is life ever really that bad that it needs to ...

Hi, ehte. :) Sorry this took so long. >.< Nitpicks: Whom did her eyes search, in this vast ocean of vagabonds? - I don't think you need to put a ...

Hello. :) Nitpicks: “Papa can we go?” - Put a comma after 'Papa'. - Sol already mentioned this. Haha. :) Yeah it sucks to be me, - I think you ...

Hello. ^_^ Nitpicks: like a firework in July. - This is so unoriginal but I LOVE it! XD These troubled times, no ones’ to blame, - Correction: 'one's' But feelings ...

Hello, Shubhi. ^_^ Here I am as you requested. :) Nitpicks: (I've got a lot of nitpicks. >.< But this chapter is long! xD) I had lot on my mind... ...

Hello. :D Catchy title. xD Sometimes seeing all of it is the highlight of my day. - I think you should put a comma after 'Sometimes'. I can see it ...

Hello. :) Nice title XD. a reason you clicked here, infact. - I think you should also just capitalize the first letter, like most of the lines. - Correction: 'in ...

First of all, Sol, CONGRATS ON THE FEATURE! :D You did great! xD ;) Nitpicks: No, I know it's helpless. - I think 'No' and the rest of the sentence ...