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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Mercy Ray Jackson: The Long Way to Redemption

    First of all, space out your writing :). I know you had paragraphs but they're so tightly bunched together! Apart from that I liked the beginning, it's a good way ...

    Dec 13, 2012


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