Lydia1995

Hello Jarred, I am reviewing this in response to your email. Firstly let me just say Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy yourself. Now then onto the review. I ...

Hello Tigs, I came to review as I promised. Ok so I see that some nit-picks have already been addressed, but I have a couple more to add. Nothing major, ...

Hello Bailey. I love your Avatar by the way! :D Anyway, onto the poem. I did like it in some ways but not in others. I do agree with RubberKnife ...

Hello! I liked this because of the originality and whimsical nature of the poem. I agree with the others that you could have made it longer and then it would ...

Hello! I liked this, you had me hooked but it took a little while to get into it. The description was good though. A couple of nit-picks that I noticed ...

Hello! I liked this, I'm not going to critique this because thats not what its there for..? It is just there to entertain :D And it did. Though I have ...

This was great JD, :D Well Done, Someone already got the nit-picks in before me so I will just say I like it. I am a HP fan but not ...

Hello! I really liked this, but first a few nit-picks, they coo her naivety I don't really think that 'coo' is the right word here. I associate 'coo' with people ...

I really like a lot of books, some of my faveourites though... 1) Harry Potter Series 2) The Chronicles of Narnia 3) Of Mice and Men 4) Chaos Walking Series ...

Hello Midnightread! :D Hmmm....interesting, the nit-picks have already been done I see, so there is nothing left for me to do except... *goes to read Chapter one* (Sorry I was ...

Hello! I really liked this, it's not often that you see poems that go into so much detail about everything. I liked your description and you clearly put all your ...

Hello iCarlyfan! I really loved the film Avatar, and I assume as you are going to write more of this that it will have something before this moment, because for ...

Hello! I really liked this, your rhyme was great. I think that the use of dream worked but didn't at the same time, it seemed a little cliché. Maybe you ...

Hello, I agree with Conrad. I can't quite work out what you are trying to tell me as the reader here. It just looks like a list of words. If ...

Hello! That was a great poem, nice and refreshing and original! I thought that the rhyme really worked throughout particualarly with the repetition of the first two lines at the ...