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Lylah

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: As soon as i get a title, you will know

    Interesting idea. I don't really have time to do the line by line kind of crit, but some comments I have are that you really should be showing us, not ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My dog

    Gone Fishing said it all! Your story is heartbreakingly sad! as for the writing bit, There are a few spelling errors, which would be well worth your time to fix. ...

    Aug 3, 2007


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)