Lymphatic_rebellion

I agree that you need more description. The imagery could be improved and made more appealing to the senses. The progtagonist seems to have a huge deficit of emotion. His ...

Hmmm....life threatening contagion is always an interesting topic. My only suggestion is that you check this for spelling errors. I look forward to seeing where you take this story.

Violent, humorous, and very fun to read.. You are most certaintly entertaining and refreshing, especially after just reading a plethora of angsty poetry.

The original title strikes me. Without the hint of Samsara I wouldn't have had any idea what you were talking about. Samsara, or ignorance of the true self, is the ...