Lynlyn

I took AP Language and Composition last year (I'm doing Literature this year...) so I don't know if I would be much help for AP Literature, but we did do ...

There is something really cool about your writing that I can never really put a finger on. I'm not sure what it is, maybe the way you describe colors - ...

I'm happy that you've added some more background to the plot here. There's a much greater sense of conflict in the second chapter, which is great. More tension means more ...

Yeah, when I write stuff out, it's not like a make a big list at the beginning and go, "Okay, and YOU die, and then YOU die... eheheheheh!" It just ...

Henna is bad for you though. The plant has some kind of poison that seeps through your skin and enters your bloodstream. I've done a lot of research on it ...

Peh, you're only 14? I'm jealous :P Over all, you have a great start, but there are few things that I would like to point out. The thatched rooves The ...

I listen to mostly classic rock (yeah, I know it's a radio concept, but it works). The Beatles, Pink Floyd, Queen, Rainbow, Led Zeppelin, Jimi Hendrix, Styx, et cetera...

I've got to go with Pat Buchanan. I mean, superior security features, top-notch builds released every couple of nights with new updates and bug fixes, pop-up blocking... very intuitive browser. ...

The lighting in the picture needs a little work - it's too dark all around, and the flash (or whatever insanely bright light is behind you) sort of washes out ...

4. My favorite. Gee, I wish I had a macro lens for this camera, yes? Nice work. Very good flower pics. Yeah. I wanted the focus to be on the ...

I think the rule of thirds could help you out here. If you had the cloud a little farther to the right (that's the great thing about clouds, if you're ...

The first one... I could take it or leave it. There's not enough contrast, in my opinion. Has this been to photoshop-land? The black specks in the concrete are a ...

These are cool, but sharpies are so hard to draw with! Wouldn't it be easier to use traditional water-based markers? Your patterns are neat, they're very 60s-ish. I especially like ...

Thanks for your comments, guys, they mean a lot. I wasn't actually expecting such a positive response :). Yeah, the wedding scene is undoubtedly what I had the most trouble ...

I like the last one too :3 but looking at it now, I'm almost sad that I didn't go and move the lawn chairs and the table. (Grandma probably would ...