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M.B.Author

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My first attempt at poerty

    My goodness is this long. It was good, but I think way to long. I agree with everyone else. But I still think this is way to long. This was ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bullets

    It was good, poetic Good for you! If Claudette liked it, then you did great. LOL. Anyway,personly, I did not quite get it. I am not the best at poetry ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Butterflies

    I like this allot to. It is so cute! Little butterflies. Aw....I liked this very much. You do very good poetry. Don't stop! Like I said about Betrayel, there was ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Betrayal

    :D :P :!: 8) :shock: Okay I wanted to make this clear, I am not like Firestarter I don't know that much about poetry. I just see if I like ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Help Me

    #1 . Looks like I am no the only one who saw those typos! you said - "inot" Which is probably into And "taht" is probably that. I don't know ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Fand-tastic!

    Hm....interaasting life. I would have never guessed. Anyway, I liked how you described your self. Thumbs up for that. And I just plain like your writing. *shrugs* Good Job and ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: No Fool 4 Luv

    This was ok. I did not love this or in your words Luv it. LOL. Sorry. Anyway, Ithink there was really no point to this. It was not bad, but ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Teacher

    Eh... I basically stopped reading after the teacher's second respon I am sorry, I have to agree. This was kinda boring and I believe you could make it shorter and ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: alternative history OR how the wooden horse never came to be

    ok... #1. I did not do research (it's summer. I am staying away from books!). So I guess that is why I have no idea what is being told in ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Other Re: Yummy Muffins

    Yum! I tried! But I took out the tomato. Tomatoes....Yeck! Bad, bad. Anyway, thanks! Did you make up that? Good for you. Later. Keep on Cooking! -- M.B.Author

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Unicorn Killers - Old, decrepit first draft thingy

    I have a few things to say. :idea: When you write a story, everyone reads it! There are a ton a crits on all your stories. I guess you are ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Queen of Dolls

    Dang, Snoink, way to disturb me. LOL. But I totally agree. Wow, Snoink, that was.......freaky. I can not say that I liked this. It was disturbing and I guess that ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: For the Sake of a Child

    :shock: :P ....... Wow, that was really good. :thumbs up: The Other Wise Man...I have that book. I have read it. I think they should put your story in the ...

    Jul 21, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beads

    That was awesome. I love and hate horrors. It's weird. I thought this was interesting. First, the people before me committed on spelling, typos, and other grammar related things. I ...

    Jul 20, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Cousins

    I don't know what to say. Um...thanks? I guess the first two were harsh and informative, while the last ones were nice, encouraging and a little insightful. I don't think ...

    Jul 7, 2007


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