M.B.Author

Sorry that I have not done a story in so long. My life has been a blur. Well you don't care. This is somewhat based on a true story. I ...

That was good. It kinda looks like Ice Cubes, is going to an end. At least for now. You did really good with this chaoter. Keep up the good work. ...

Moon! My mom used to read that story every night when I was little. -- M.B.Author

I have to agree with them. It was OK. Not the best you have done. The riddle was catchy, and clever. Personally I hate riddles. And this is not an ...

OK, I liked this alot. It was as good as the first. No, even better then the first. Now, I hate myself for pointing this out I dammed myself to ...

Is it a girl or a boy? I am guessing it is a girl. Now, I liked this. I liked how you started from the beginning, and well, from another ...

COOL! I loved this poem. Good job. Keep up the good work. Thumbs up. -- M.B.Author

It was good. Who is Rob? I haven't read any of the starting posts. Sorry :? :(. Whoops! Anyway, it was OK. And um... Evil Luke! Keep up the good ...

Yay! More Naruto fan writing! Go Naruto! Anyway about the story, loved it. It was fun and interasting. It was long, so how many parts do you think on having ...

It was ok. I didn't feel like I was rapped around it. Some parts were week. Some things were confusing, it was to short too. I am, sorry, it didn't ...

I liked. I love the characters. I loved it alot. Two thumbs up. -- M.B.Author

'Loved it! This sort of light-hearted piece brightens up one's day, and makes one walk around with a big goofy smile on one's face.' - Goldenheart I totaly agree. It ...

Isn't this the same story title? And yes there were a lot of spelling problems. And there were simple typos. There were some still confusing. -- M.B.Author

OK. It was good. The length was good. It wasn't to long or to short. I liked it a lot. Some of it was confusing though. Some parts were messed ...

It was good. But I didn't get it! What did it mean? Was it from the Middle East of or something? Maybe you can explain it better in the poem. ...