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Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: On Love and Longing /P
Dido. I dido everyone. But, I think it was kinda boring though. It seemed a little long. I think you should put it into smaller parts. There were like one ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: Loyalty chapter #2
Hm...I see what you guys are saying. Thanks, I hope you guys enjoy #3. Thanks again. -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Your Naruto Life Story Chapter 2
Just like #1, it was great. Keep on writing. :D :D :D :D :D :D It deserves smiles! Hope to hear more. -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Your Naruto Life Story Chapter 1
The Naruto show is great and you captured what you thought perfectly. Two thumbs up! Good job. I cannot wait for more. But there were some typos, but everyone makes ...
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Ice cubes
Sadly I started to read Ice Cubes on chap. 12. Not at the begging. But, I liked it. Ice Cubes is awesome. -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #28
It was good. Keep up the good work. -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Grandma
It was sweet Lucky_Duck. Thanks, I know MawMaw would've appreciated it. I did. It was a little short, but that wasn't bad. Thanks. :D -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Unknown
It was good. But the title, is it suppossed to be "Unknown"? Or did you not have a title for it? Oh, well! Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Sunrise
Yes, it was good (like usual :D). This is not the first time you have made short poems. Try to lengthen them out. But other then being short, it was ...
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Masked
I echo everyone else. It was good, but it was too short. You might of wanted to add more detail. -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Fairytale
I liked it alot. And yes FUNNY HOW IT WORKS! :twisted: About the poem, I loved how you described it. Two thumbs up!! -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Betrayal
WOW! I totaly understand. I liked how you put it! It is so true. Good job. Keep up the great work. -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Why?
It was good, and me too, I'm not emo. I hope never to be one either. But, your poem was good. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Accident? Hardly...
was interesting. Not one of my faves. I echo everyone else, punctuation! Well, that's about it. -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: This Instant
It was good, and it was thought provoking. It was very good. And ironically, it hit close to home. And it seemed so real. I appreciate you writing this. I ...
May 19, 2007
