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lol. Like it: 5/10 --MB

Wow, this was very pretty. I like in the first stanza about it singing to you. I like your adjetives and how you painted an image in my head. It ...

Way cool! I echo everyone else, about the crits and the errors. I love this story! Is 15 coming soon? -- M.B.Author

HMm....sounds familiar! lol! I liked it, it was awesome! -- M.B.Author

I echo everyone else. I get it, but I found it all little dull. Like, no rhymes. It sounded like you were trying to rhyme, but couldn't do it very ...

Yes, this one is much better then the first. But to be honest, i didn't like this that much. I think it was a little boring, to short, and there ...

This is an analysis on "Call of the Wild". If you haven't read the book, you might not want to read this. You won't know what I am talking about. ...

I know that this is really long, and a little boring, but, it is a report for school. I know it is long. Crit welcome! -- M.B.Author

This is a report on Amelia Earhart. Enjoy! __________________________ On July 24, 1897, Amelia Earhart was born, at her home in Atchison, Kansas. Amelia was the oldest daughter to Edwin ...

I wrote this during the summer and just found it. Enjoy! _____________ When Joe saw the paw, he was very terrified. So he dashed behind the nearest tree and poked ...

Crit welcome! Enjoy. _________________ Many ships had been coming from Ireland bringing destitute families and orphans who were fleeing the potato famine. Often the ships were ill equipped and unfit ...

This was a school report on a virtue. And I did it last year. Enjoy! ___________________ A gentle quiet spirit is a great virtue. It is a value that all ...

This is not very good. Open to crit! Enjoy. ____________ When roses aren't red, And violets aren't blue, What will become of me and you? When the grass isn't greener, ...

I am that good of a poem writer! Crit welcome. _______________________ The light pitter-patter, Of the rain drumming on my head, Hide my tears, like nothing the matter. So long ...

Is the second one an Ork from Warhammer 40k? I think it is. Okay, I really like these. Good job! The first one is cool! -- M.B.Author