M.B.Author

That was good! The ryming was always perfect, and the poem made sense. It deserves two thumbs up!! Just be you and not me, and you will succeed :lol:. Keep ...

Aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so cute! It was adorable. But a little short, I understand that you wrote it awhile ago. But, still, it was cute. I liked it alot. -- ...

Yup, Yup, It was good! I totaly agree with FUZZHEAD. W O W Two thumbs up. -- M.B.Author

It was good. The ryming was somewhat off. But, it was entertaining and somewhat fun to read. I really don't know what to say. -- M.B.Author

Ok, lets start with, GOOD JOB! I love horses. And you captured their beauty and your passion is shown in the story. It was spectacular. I felt I was right ...

It was good. -- M.B.Author

I have the same problem, I write short sentences. :oops:. Over all though, it was great! It had interasting little twists in it that grabbed my attention. Great job. Keep ...

Your humor was a little weak, but it was creative and fun to read. I think there might have been one or two typos, but who cares about typos? (not ...

It was good, a few shaky places here and there, but over all it was good. It was interasting in a good way. I like your stories, so keep on ...

It was good! It was creative, interasting and it drew me in. Are you going to post more of it? Well, I sure hope so :D. Thumbs up. Keep up ...

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

It was good. Some spots were week, but other then that, it was good. -- M.B.Author