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I agree with Goldie. It was good. You should be proud of yourself. :D -- M.B.Author

Hm...only one criquite? Well, thanks Meeves, it was encouraging. :D. -- M.B.Author P.S. Everyone feel free to tell me what you think about this. :)

Yes, I will try to write more, just wait. My live is very hectic right now. Sooner or later I will write more. I think there are 50 entries in ...

Thanks everyone In my next chapters I will add your instructions and make it better. Thanks again, -- M.B.Author

It was interasting. I love reading poetry. It could use a little work, but over all it was good. I like your poems, hope to hear more. -- M.B.Author

I absolutely Love your poems! This one was so awesome! Really creative. I really, really cannot wait for more of your poems. Good job. -- M.B.Author

Very interasting story. Thats all I can say. Good job. -- M.B.Author

Good job :D. I always love your stories. I cannot wait for more. :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: -- M.B.Author

It was good. Hope to hear more of it. Later -- M.B.Author

It was good, but where is 25? You put 24.5 and then went to 26! I cannot tell if it is a typo or you skipped some story, but good ...

These are only three lines each. And when there are spaces, it is the end of the haiku. Enjoy! ****************************************** Cold winter turning Flowers blooming, buds sprouting Spring ha

Good job! Nice story, even though I have not read any other parts of the story. But hope to see more. Later. -- M.B.Author

Good poem! :) I liked it alot. I really like your poems, good luck! Cannot wait to see more of your poems. Later. -- M.B.Author

Yeah, your poems are great! You are doing a great job. Hope to hear more. See you around. -- M.B.Author

Yay, more Ice Cubes! I really like this story, so, keep up the good work. Hope to here more. -- M.B.Author