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Re: pretty pictures
You have purdy hand writing. Way better then mine. Just one question, did you hand draw them. Because I have some templates that make the pictures look just like that. ...
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Re: Beauty, Sleep
The only thing I can see is Sorry, this picture is temporally unavailable Can I do anything? -- M.B.Author
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Re: Beady girl...
Um...I can't see your pictures! Please repost, so I can see! -- M.B.Author
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Re: Gal's avatars
Dang girl! You are on a role! You made these? You have some serious talent. I do some drawing myself, and to me, it is hard! Then to see your, ...
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Re: Seduction
I was expecting a lot worse, aspecially when I saw it was rated R. Under any circumstances, never feel bad about this, or your writing. This was intense, gripping, and ...
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Re: Imperfect World
Hello, me again. This is your poem: [pre]Imperfect World We all want to be special But we’re not. Now, Your font is already hard to read, but with this slanted, ...
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Re: New
There is a couple things with this poem. 1. The text was strange. It was hard to read, the second to last and the last lines, Ic ouldn't really make ...
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Re: "Dealing"
I thought is was okay. There was somehting missing. Kinda like, it's all about me, me, me. And a little like, a pity me, poem. I found that allot of ...
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Re: Haunted
I quite like it. I fond it entertaining. Yeah, I would definitely say it is a poem! There not much I can say. It's kinda short. XD -- M.B.Author
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Re: There
What?! That was odd. I was reading it, and thinking maybe it was your dad, or maybe like a boy frined or something, but mom? What a twist. I don't ...
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Re: With Wood and Resin
When I first read this, is was like, what the heck is she talking about? Then I went down and I read the first crit, and said it was about ...
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Re: Singing For Stars
Don't get me wrong, I liked this too. I really liked this line: Who else has power that’s this bright? Brilliant! Most of this was brilliant. Okay, I felt like ...
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Re: Garden of Life
Good job Lucky. Okay, one thing I don't like is that you say: Life is like a garden, Then you say two lines down: Friends are like a garden, That's ...
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Re: Poem
Isis is right. How some poems and stories should be original and not same old same old. Like busy bee, heard that about one million times. Soft little wind, been ...
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Re: Wet Dogs
Yeah! Wet dogs. So cute. I don't know if this is bad, but when I read it, I tried to picture it. And I tried to forget the title. And ...
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