M.B.Author

I know that you cannot tell that this is a fantasy, but wait for the next chapter, and then you'll see okay? Crit welcomed. Enjoy! ________________ "I am sorry I ...

okay here goes, I liked this allot. I felt allot of feeling in this. So thumbs up for that. 1. This: See the serious terse and good Terse? teers maybe? ...

Okay, just to let everyone know. This is a script. So it is supposed to be written like this (I know that because of my teacher). So enjoy! -- M.B.Autor

I have to agrree with the last crit. I cannot see them I tried clicking on them, going back and reopening it and everything. Maybe you could repost this to ...

What an interasting poem. I like this allot. Some ryming. And I noticed if you look at this poem really hard and really read it through. You can find the ...

Wow! The depth and true meaning of this poem is paralizing! Very well done. I am speechless. I give it a thumbs up! But I am already scared of sharks, ...

There was no depth to it. See, I liked it. But, what was the meaning of writing this. What was the purpose of the poem. Is there more then meets ...

*Twitch* Hm...what do I think about this poem? Oh yeah! It was interasting. I too liked the way it rymed. I too liked it in a weird/freaky way. I too ...

This is my play. My friend kinda helped me do this. This is my first play I have ever written. This is scene one. Crit welcome! ---------------------------- Dear Vivian CAST ...

Um...Why did you delete this? I you have is ...gone. Not much of a poem. I wich I could've read it. Are you going to repost this? Please PM if ...

For a prologue it was pretty good. For a story, it seems boring. But, I think it might turn into something good. I'll watch this. I liked this part: I ...

Awesome! I know about Twilight, but, don't read it. I guess it follows the story...? Anyway, I like your ryming. Good job. -- M.B.Author

I love this. I do think that maybe some of the parts thought the whole story was kinda boring. But, I still love this. The ending was so heart breaking. ...

Aww, how cute. I love this. It is really nice. One thing, other then all the little miss spells, a little grammar probs. You said: “How are we going to ...

AHH! I am very mad, I read part three and then read part one *sniffs* Anywho, great job! I love this. Going to read part two! -- M.B.Author