M.B.Author

Yeah! Part 6. Very good, yes, very good. I too was wondering when you said about M's name. I was like, okay, are you going to tell me his name ...

OMG! This story is getting better and better! I am so I have been devouring this story going from one part to the next! I just cannot stop reading! You ...

Oh! I sooooooooo hope she doesn't abort the baby. This story is coming around so good! I think I might have spotted a typo or something somewhere like maybe a ...

Hmmm....wow. A lot happening. On part to I had a hunch she was pregnant. I liked how you have written all of this so far. I like how you go ...

Awesome (I told you I would read more!). I soooo want to read more of this. You got me hooked. And a cliff-hanger too! You are such a good writer. ...

Very good writing. You made me get hooked immediately and I want to read more (which I will). You brought the main character out right away, which I really think ...

Hm...What can I say about this? Well, I liked this. Not the best though of your work. -- M.B.Author

I like this too. And, yeah, why the colon? Was that a typo or why is it there? I like the message, the sermon if you may that this poem ...

Dido both crits. Like the other peeps, it was kinda like all about you. It felt like there was not allot of emotion in it. I don't know, just something ...

Yeah, I liked this too. I'm not a poet and don't know much about poetry, so I just tell you from the gut. Um...This was interasting. I always like the ...

I liked this. I liked how you described the leaf, rock, and the mountain. Good Job! You are getting the hang of writing poems. -- M.B.Author P.S. You are not ...

I liked this, but I am sorry I cannot give you much advise, for I don't know much about poetry. But I like this allot. Best of luck, -- M.B.Author

PAT! He is the all seeing person...thing...something... Go Pat! -- M.B.Author

I thought that was baeutiful! I love this part: You say: While I lose myself in your eyes, Ocean blue, Drawing me ever closer; to the sea. I think that ...

Wow, That was creeply good. I think you did this well. But like what Rick said, are you wishing it on some one? Is this a true story? I am ...