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Strangely beautiful. Simple, yet packs a punch. Full of sharp imagery and emotion. I don't have any complaints about this poem. Keep up the good work! I agree. But I ...

I liked this. I think the rest of he story is going to get really cool. I agree with Dreamy Day, the ending was awesome! But some of the parts ...

I feel so bad for you! I am so sorry. :( I echo everyone above me. It was a little blockish. And a way I think could capture your readers ...

Hm...interasting. Kinda scary though. I like this quite a bit. I like your plot. In the eyes of the killer was a good twist. I think there can be a ...

I WANT MORE! :laughs: I liked this. A true epic. Good choice. I think you did quite well. I would really like to hear more. PLease post, -- M.B.Author

Awwww...That was so sweet and sad! I really like this, the story was told well and I liked how you ended it with that letter. And...well...I really liked it. Keep ...

I really do hope there is more to this story. I liked this. I agree with everyone else here. It has major potential. I love these types of stories. And ...

I liked this. I always love poems, eapecially love poems. It was short and sweet. And I like poems like that. Good Job :D ! -- M.B.Author

I liked this alot too. Awesome! Keep up the good work, -- M.B.Author

I echo everyone else. I cannot tell from personal experience (I have an older brother, does that count?). But this was sweet, sad, touching, and happy = :smt049 :smt022 :smt064 ...

Real, quick. This is no ordenary school room. I am homeschooled. And my sclass room is the basement. Just wanted to point that out. Other then that, thanks. -- M.B.Author

I have to say the same thing. So, I will tell you in my own words. :D 1. I agree. maybe put it in paragraphs. That would be better to ...

I totally agree with all of the above! This was really good. It was very creative! Great story line. I agree, that the starting was excellent and as you brought ...

This was a history assignment. I had to write a paper on this. So here it is. The instructions on how to do the experiment is in the third paragraph. ...

I tis totaly Fred. I hatre that guy! :D -- M.B.Author