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At first I didn't get it. It taked a while fo rme to get things like this, or eveyrhting. Anyway back to your poem: Very funny. I liked to say ...

Wow, this was very pretty. I like in the first stanza about it singing to you. I like your adjetives and how you painted an image in my head. It ...

Yes, this one is much better then the first. But to be honest, i didn't like this that much. I think it was a little boring, to short, and there ...

I was expecting a lot worse, aspecially when I saw it was rated R. Under any circumstances, never feel bad about this, or your writing. This was intense, gripping, and ...

Hello, me again. This is your poem: [pre]Imperfect World We all want to be special But we’re not. Now, Your font is already hard to read, but with this slanted, ...

There is a couple things with this poem. 1. The text was strange. It was hard to read, the second to last and the last lines, Ic ouldn't really make ...

I thought is was okay. There was somehting missing. Kinda like, it's all about me, me, me. And a little like, a pity me, poem. I found that allot of ...

What?! That was odd. I was reading it, and thinking maybe it was your dad, or maybe like a boy frined or something, but mom? What a twist. I don't ...

When I first read this, is was like, what the heck is she talking about? Then I went down and I read the first crit, and said it was about ...

Don't get me wrong, I liked this too. I really liked this line: Who else has power that’s this bright? Brilliant! Most of this was brilliant. Okay, I felt like ...

Good job Lucky. Okay, one thing I don't like is that you say: Life is like a garden, Then you say two lines down: Friends are like a garden, That's ...

Isis is right. How some poems and stories should be original and not same old same old. Like busy bee, heard that about one million times. Soft little wind, been ...

Yeah! Wet dogs. So cute. I don't know if this is bad, but when I read it, I tried to picture it. And I tried to forget the title. And ...

okay here goes, I liked this allot. I felt allot of feeling in this. So thumbs up for that. 1. This: See the serious terse and good Terse? teers maybe? ...

What an interasting poem. I like this allot. Some ryming. And I noticed if you look at this poem really hard and really read it through. You can find the ...