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Yeah, I liked this too. I'm not a poet and don't know much about poetry, so I just tell you from the gut. Um...This was interasting. I always like the ...

Wow, That was creeply good. I think you did this well. But like what Rick said, are you wishing it on some one? Is this a true story? I am ...

Strangely beautiful. Simple, yet packs a punch. Full of sharp imagery and emotion. I don't have any complaints about this poem. Keep up the good work! I agree. But I ...

I liked this. I think the rest of he story is going to get really cool. I agree with Dreamy Day, the ending was awesome! But some of the parts ...

Hm...interasting. Kinda scary though. I like this quite a bit. I like your plot. In the eyes of the killer was a good twist. I think there can be a ...

I really do hope there is more to this story. I liked this. I agree with everyone else here. It has major potential. I love these types of stories. And ...

I echo everyone else. I cannot tell from personal experience (I have an older brother, does that count?). But this was sweet, sad, touching, and happy = :smt049 :smt022 :smt064 ...

I have to say the same thing. So, I will tell you in my own words. :D 1. I agree. maybe put it in paragraphs. That would be better to ...

I totally agree with all of the above! This was really good. It was very creative! Great story line. I agree, that the starting was excellent and as you brought ...

It was good, poetic Good for you! If Claudette liked it, then you did great. LOL. Anyway,personly, I did not quite get it. I am not the best at poetry ...

I like this allot to. It is so cute! Little butterflies. Aw....I liked this very much. You do very good poetry. Don't stop! Like I said about Betrayel, there was ...

:D :P :!: 8) :shock: Okay I wanted to make this clear, I am not like Firestarter I don't know that much about poetry. I just see if I like ...

#1 . Looks like I am no the only one who saw those typos! you said - "inot" Which is probably into And "taht" is probably that. I don't know ...

Eh... I basically stopped reading after the teacher's second respon I am sorry, I have to agree. This was kinda boring and I believe you could make it shorter and ...

ok... #1. I did not do research (it's summer. I am staying away from books!). So I guess that is why I have no idea what is being told in ...