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Re: The Unicorn Killers - Old, decrepit first draft thingy
I have a few things to say. :idea: When you write a story, everyone reads it! There are a ton a crits on all your stories. I guess you are ...
Jul 21, 2007 -
Re: The Queen of Dolls
Dang, Snoink, way to disturb me. LOL. But I totally agree. Wow, Snoink, that was.......freaky. I can not say that I liked this. It was disturbing and I guess that ...
Jul 21, 2007 -
Re: For the Sake of a Child
:shock: :P ....... Wow, that was really good. :thumbs up: The Other Wise Man...I have that book. I have read it. I think they should put your story in the ...
Jul 21, 2007 -
Re: Beads
That was awesome. I love and hate horrors. It's weird. I thought this was interesting. First, the people before me committed on spelling, typos, and other grammar related things. I ...
Jul 20, 2007 -
Re: Sex, Drugs, and Rock and Roll: Part Two
OK, I liked this alot. It was as good as the first. No, even better then the first. Now, I hate myself for pointing this out I dammed myself to ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Sex, Drugs, and Rock & Roll: Part 1
Is it a girl or a boy? I am guessing it is a girl. Now, I liked this. I liked how you started from the beginning, and well, from another ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #29
It was good. Who is Rob? I haven't read any of the starting posts. Sorry :? :(. Whoops! Anyway, it was OK. And um... Evil Luke! Keep up the good ...
May 23, 2007 -
Re: Chapter 5 - Part 1
Yay! More Naruto fan writing! Go Naruto! Anyway about the story, loved it. It was fun and interasting. It was long, so how many parts do you think on having ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: Bupropion
It was ok. I didn't feel like I was rapped around it. Some parts were week. Some things were confusing, it was to short too. I am, sorry, it didn't ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: Fantasy Reporter
'Loved it! This sort of light-hearted piece brightens up one's day, and makes one walk around with a big goofy smile on one's face.' - Goldenheart I totaly agree. It ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: Chapter One; Stranger at the Door (edited)
OK. It was good. The length was good. It wasn't to long or to short. I liked it a lot. Some of it was confusing though. Some parts were messed ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: E'in Sof
It was good. But I didn't get it! What did it mean? Was it from the Middle East of or something? Maybe you can explain it better in the poem. ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: On Love and Longing /P
Dido. I dido everyone. But, I think it was kinda boring though. It seemed a little long. I think you should put it into smaller parts. There were like one ...
May 22, 2007 -
Re: Your Naruto Life Story Chapter 2
Just like #1, it was great. Keep on writing. :D :D :D :D :D :D It deserves smiles! Hope to hear more. -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Your Naruto Life Story Chapter 1
The Naruto show is great and you captured what you thought perfectly. Two thumbs up! Good job. I cannot wait for more. But there were some typos, but everyone makes ...
May 21, 2007
