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Yes, it was good (like usual :D). This is not the first time you have made short poems. Try to lengthen them out. But other then being short, it was ...

That was good! The ryming was always perfect, and the poem made sense. It deserves two thumbs up!! Just be you and not me, and you will succeed :lol:. Keep ...

Ok, lets start with, GOOD JOB! I love horses. And you captured their beauty and your passion is shown in the story. It was spectacular. I felt I was right ...

I have the same problem, I write short sentences. :oops:. Over all though, it was great! It had interasting little twists in it that grabbed my attention. Great job. Keep ...

It was really good. It was a sure fire hit! (whatever that meens). I love fantasy stories, and this one was really good! I never read any of your stories, ...

It was interasting. It didn't do much for me though. It might have been to long maybe. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't great. This is the first time I ...

Good job :D. I always love your stories. I cannot wait for more. :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: -- M.B.Author

Wow, is all I can say. I have been waiting for RUN for awhile now. And it was worth thewait. Good job Lucky_Duck. :D. Hope to hear more! Keep up ...