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Awwww...That was so sweet and sad! I really like this, the story was told well and I liked how you ended it with that letter. And...well...I really liked it. Keep ...

I liked this. I always love poems, eapecially love poems. It was short and sweet. And I like poems like that. Good Job :D ! -- M.B.Author

I liked this alot too. Awesome! Keep up the good work, -- M.B.Author

Real, quick. This is no ordenary school room. I am homeschooled. And my sclass room is the basement. Just wanted to point that out. Other then that, thanks. -- M.B.Author

My goodness is this long. It was good, but I think way to long. I agree with everyone else. But I still think this is way to long. This was ...

This was ok. I did not love this or in your words Luv it. LOL. Sorry. Anyway, Ithink there was really no point to this. It was not bad, but ...

Yum! I tried! But I took out the tomato. Tomatoes....Yeck! Bad, bad. Anyway, thanks! Did you make up that? Good for you. Later. Keep on Cooking! -- M.B.Author

I don't know what to say. Um...thanks? I guess the first two were harsh and informative, while the last ones were nice, encouraging and a little insightful. I don't think ...

That was good. It kinda looks like Ice Cubes, is going to an end. At least for now. You did really good with this chaoter. Keep up the good work. ...

I have to agree with them. It was OK. Not the best you have done. The riddle was catchy, and clever. Personally I hate riddles. And this is not an ...

COOL! I loved this poem. Good job. Keep up the good work. Thumbs up. -- M.B.Author

I liked. I love the characters. I loved it alot. Two thumbs up. -- M.B.Author

Isn't this the same story title? And yes there were a lot of spelling problems. And there were simple typos. There were some still confusing. -- M.B.Author

Hm...I see what you guys are saying. Thanks, I hope you guys enjoy #3. Thanks again. -- M.B.Author

Sadly I started to read Ice Cubes on chap. 12. Not at the begging. But, I liked it. Ice Cubes is awesome. -- M.B.Author