M.B.Author

It was good! It was creative, interasting and it drew me in. Are you going to post more of it? Well, I sure hope so :D. Thumbs up. Keep up ...

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

Great story. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author

It was good. Some spots were week, but other then that, it was good. -- M.B.Author

It was good. -- M.B.Author

Awesome story! I liked it alot. Keep up the good work. I am, hoping for more. Two thumbs up. :D :D :D -- M.B.Author

L_D, It was good, don't loose hope. Your poems are always sooooooo good. Please write more! Keep up the good work. -- M.B.Author

I liked it. It was interasting and well written. It was good. Keep up the good work. -- M.B.Author

I liked it! It was original. Your next poems are sure to be great! hope to hear more. Keep up the good work. -- M.B.Author

I have always hated Nancy Drew stories, but I liked this one. It was differant then the real books. I want to hear more. Keep up the good work. -- ...

Well, I am guessing you rewrote it, I didn't read the first draft. So I cannot say it was better then the first. But, it was good! It did feal ...

Um....thanks? What does "do it" for you? Well, I don't know what to say. -- M.B.Author

It was.....ok. You pick interasting topics. Some parts were good, others ok. But other then some parts, it was good. Good luck. -- M.B.Author