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Interesting topic, I like it! Good work, I like your poems, hope to hear more! -- M.B.Author

Wow, is all I can say. I have been waiting for RUN for awhile now. And it was worth the wait. Good job Lucky_Duck. :D. Hope to hear more! Keep ...

Hey, awesome story! Naruto fan here too. Can't wait to here more. Good luck. -- M.B.Author

I have to agree with DB. Good story though. Good luck. -- M.B.Author

Wow, good piece. And at the looks of it, you look pretty good {lol}. Cool subject. Can't wait to see more. Good luck. -- M.B.Author

Hey, Good and all, but "She giggled as the two show invisble darts back and forth." What is that sopposed to meen? -- M.B.Author

Hey, Loved it. But "plain" was sopposed to be "played", right? Cool and interasting! Keep up the good work. Hope to hear more! -- M.B.Author

Nice story, well written. Strange topic to chose, but grabbed my attention. Some little things here and there, but over all, it was good! -- M.B.Author

Yeah, I was going to say, "curled ear"? Anyway, great work. Well done! :D