MaKriege

You do a very good job of getting your point across, but a few of your stanzas don't make sense. For example, in your eighth stanza you say you are ...

Warning this is kind of a Debby-downer review, but it needs to be. Like the other reviewers mentioned, this is very vague and doesn't have many emotions tied into it. ...

This has a very weird, almost spooky presence. I wasn't scared or horrified, but it didn't seem like a normal poem either. Honestly it reminded me of a serial killer ...

Aley, First off I wanted to say that this is very created and has a very provocative title. Not trying to say that the title is the most important thing, ...

I'd like to start off by saying this is very pretty! There are however a few things I thought could do to improve it. In the first stanza, I feel ...

First things first, this is the first science fiction poem I've ever read and I loved it! The words bounce to their own rhythm in a way that lets the ...

Positives first, this poem had a very clear theme that questioned the readers made them think as they read on. This kind of technique shows you have good knowledge about ...

Okay, well I'd like to start by saying that this is very pretty and has a great title, but I think it can be improved. Starting and ending with it's ...