Mageheart

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you like my poem.

They definitely help! Thank you so much for the help with the poem. I haven't read Moon's or Kaur's work, though I'm guessing I should now. Thanks again for dropping ...

I haven't given you my soul yet because I traded it to Rydia for some cats a year ago. :P In all seriousness, thanks for the review! I completely forget ...

Thanks for the review! Would "tidal surge" work better?

It definitely helps! I'm actually planning on starting revisions this Sunday, so your review was perfect timing. Thank you so much for all of your corrections and advice! I'll work ...

I'm sorry for not going into specifics, but it was throughout this entire chapter and the last. I didn't have time then - and still don't have the time - ...

You're welcome! Even I had to reread those parts once or twice, hearing about the politics of a fictional land is super interesting. I can see why you enjoy writing ...

You're welcome!

You're welcome! I love how much thought and effort you're putting into this wonderful story.

Then again, just having him show up would be good! I think you would run the risk of the reader forgetting about how much of a threat he is if ...

I feel like it would be pretty believable! Kiernan seems pretty upset about Redway's lack of action regarding "the chosen one", and also seems like he might act impulsively if ...

You're welcome!

You're welcome! I'm glad that my review could help.

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Oh, okay! I was just curious. Usually, I consider spelling a different category. I'll be more clear about that in my future reviews!