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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Death of a Kingdom

    Hi, I would like to mention at first that I really appreciate your work and the story was amazing. Keep writing and keep introducing us to the new and amazing ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Nostalgia

    Hi Annie, Maheen here for a review... Well, this is not exactly a critique sandwich, I would just go on expressing what I really like about your work and how ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: A Crazy Day in the Life of Jake Wells

    Hey there! Excuse my punctuation, I am too lazy to use it correctly even in the reviews. So, I must say, the dream story concept is pretty cliche, however, you ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Humanity's Last Hope Prologue

    Hey there! Maheen here to present a critique sandwich ! :) Excuse the punctuation, I am too lazy to use it properly even in a review. This is a very ...

    May 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I am

    Hi there! Maheen here for a review! Excuse my punctuation, I am too lazy to use punctuations even in a review. I would start off by saying that personally I ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Sane (The Old Version)

    Hi Willachilles! Hope you are doing great. Sorry for a late review, anyways here I am now! Excuse my punctuation, I am too lazy to use it correctly even in ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Suhaag Raat

    Hello.. First of all, I know that you have issues with English Language, so on that note, 'well done here'. Secondly, I see there are no comments or reviews here, ...

    May 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dreams

    Hi, First of all, I really like your poem. It makes home feel like more and more of a secured shelter where we are tend to be nurtured and cherished, ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Presidential Campaign Speech

    Hi, All right, so here you have some really good points regarding safeguarding the interests of the United States of America. I won't criticise you on those areas, they are ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Other » Other, General Re: Mirror Mirror

    Hi, Maheen here for a review.. So, we have quite an interesting concept here. A lot can be written related to it with a lot of different perspectives. With that ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Other » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Depressed One

    Hi, Maheen here for a review. First of all, you are or I suppose, you must be good at writing. The passage might be reflecting your current state of mind, ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who Survived

    Hi, Maheen here for a review.... I'll be very honest here. The story sort of lingers over the same thing, but you have the ability to do that without the ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: This does not exist anymore 2

    I appreciate your writing. But the easiest way can be MERELY to think of the fact that you are at funeral. I mean, when you get to the real meaning ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Confidence is key...I guess

    Look, you seem to be an extremely beautiful person to me. And mind you, people say I am very good at judging others and I truly think you are awesome. ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: An Ideal Suicide

    That is nice piece of writing, pointing towards dying with dignity. No doubt you are a gifted and dedicated writer. However, I would like to ask you something not actually ...

    Apr 14, 2015


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