Maia

Hey! I really liked this poem, it's really sad but beautifull at the same time. The title, the first line 'Once upon a time' and the last line " and ...

Wow that is beautiful! The rythm is great for the first verse but the second verse I found a bit stop-starty (if that's a word). The rythm sort of started ...

This is a really nice poem, it is a good subject that you question: Is time a friend or foe? The only suggestion I would make is for the last ...

I was captivated by this poem, it is just utterly brilliant! I like how you repeat the line: "I am not just a body" Over and over again throughout the ...

I really like this story. All it takes is a smile from a waitress and a kind word which I think is really sweet. I think that it would have ...

This is a really good piece! When you say I, it's like you're talking to us and it makes it really engaging. I particularly like the first three paragraphs and ...

I would like to start by saying that this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. It is so elegant how each line is so short ...

Wow! This is a really good poem. The rhyming is good and even until the end, and that makes it stand out more. Most of the lines are of the ...

Maia here! This is a really touching poem, you have really captured the sadness of a soldiers death and the morning of those who knew him. Your rhyming is a ...

This is a really good poem. I find it really cool how you have associated the church bells and the guns. I think you should put some more punctuation in ...