Maisie

^Thank you so much! And sure, I'd be delighted to critique your story.

Thank you!

Hi Esther! Can you review the first chapter of my novel please?

Sophia 1. I must admit, out of all the things my mother has done, this ought to be the worst. A lot of things have happened over the past six ...

Hey Temptation! Do you mind if I crit a little? Okay, so I'm gonna start off with the good points and the I'll suggest what you may need to improve ...

Thanks Amy!

Do you have to review a persons work before you can post your own?

^ Thank you for the constructive crit. :mrgreen: I shall re-write this eventually. Then, I shall repost it.

When we met My mind was set It was you and I You and me That’s all we ever needed That’s all we ever wanted. I never knew what a ...

The girl takes steps very slowly and looks all around her. She knows she isn't safe here. Her scars are there to prove it. "This is a savage planet." she ...

I'm inspired by here because she got 300 rejection slips before somebody ended up signing a deal with her.

Hi Maisie, welcome to YWS! I'm Amy, nice to meet you. :) If you have any questions or want a review, feel free to send me a PM (private message). ...

Hi, I'm new here. I love books and have been writing (and taking it seriously) for about a year and half now. I find just by reading this one thread ...