MajorKillaClown

Well this poem is certainly optimistic which is always welcome. :) Just make sure to try and check the grammar/spellings like on the last line where it should be "pays" ...

I'm never good with understanding a poems's "real meaning" nonetheless I thoroughly enjoyed this poem a lot! The vocab for a starter was that at an elitist level and stayed ...

I liked this as it was a sort of nice and brief poem that was pretty realistic and easily understandable which makes it very reader friendly as they're not stuck ...

ah I see what you did at the end, and it was really clever! I never expected that to happen aha, okay now down to the review. I really liked ...

that was a really beautiful piece and it has made me realise how much my mother does for me as well. Now down to the review, I thoroughly enjoyed it. ...

I liked this quite a lot and it was reasonably short and not to drawn out :) I'll admit I've always thought a lot about these kinda things being quite ...

One word... unique. This piece really did fascinate and it kept me reading, and reading until I got to the end and I was really indulged into it all. I ...

It's a decent start to a story. I think that you need to try and use more description though when writing and better adjectives. As a tip once you've finished ...

Nice poem. It was was really well thought out and it did a good job of keeping the reader interested in trying to guess what the thing was and then ...

nice and short I liked it a lot, something to brighten my gloomy day. It was really clever and well done and I was just laughing away quietly. It was ...

This is piece seems pretty interesting and I like it especially how there's lots of mysteries and questions that we, the readers still have that help attract our attention and ...