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Re: Desolate: Chapter One
So to start off, I was kind of confused. You skipped over what the FBI agent had to say to her and left out allot of detail. I have allot ...
Sep 4, 2012 -
Re: Desolate: Prologue
I like it :) It makes the readers want more, what happened to her father? Why is the FBI there in the middle of the night? And the tone of ...
Sep 4, 2012