Mallyboomer

Very nice... I like the simplicity of it, and it does get a definite emotion across. I agree with Demeter with at least the word "Unknown" isn't quite right here, ...

Thank you all for the warm welcome *grins* I really appreciate it, and I hope to see you all around soon! ~Mally P.S. Sorry for the belated reply, had a ...

"I... think..." Ella stammered. "Sure you do" Sienna said in her ever-whispery tone; she raised that impossibly arched eyebrow an inch higher than I'd ever seen it go. Ella wasn't ...

I like the concept... chess is a cool topic. A few notes: Who serves his scents Of decaf and muffins This isn't *bad* but when you say "his scents" I ...

Bella: I knew there was something off about the last line. There was a section there and i took it out because really, it didn't fit with the rest of ...

[ Just a quick note, folks : I think this might be more "prosetry" than anything else, so if there's a better section for this to go, just let me ...

Gwenevire- Hehe, they are fun to start! It's nice to meet you and thanks for the welcome =)

Night Mistress- Thanks so much, I appreciate the help and the welcome! Merry_Haven- Hehe, but at least your notebooks are out in plain view! Mine just sit in those sad ...

Absolutely shiver-inducing. I am no one to critique, I just wanted to say that I loved all of it... the imagery, the perspective. Adina is perfect because she has simultaneously ...

Wow, I really like this... This might be a weird thing to notice, but I love how much punch the verses with short words deliver: I don’t want to be ...

Well, I'm brand new here and a bit of a forum novice (I've been in them, but not extremely actively). My name is Mallory, I'm just newly 18 and have ...