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Oh wow! This is a terrific poem, luv. I don't say this often, but I loved it. It read clean, made sense, filled in the blanks, but left questions. It ...

Hey there, love. Okay, here we go. First of all, I thought your poem was very nice. I feel that it would have been better to see something like this ...

Hullo there. I liked this poem a terrible lot. For some reason, and oddly enough I believe that it was the serene and surreal ambiance of your affection for this ...

Hey there, First Impression: I liked your poem. Anything I write is of the intent to be helpful. First of all, I thought this was a great example of the ...

Hello, First. Wow. I instantly fell in love with your style. You really capture the halfway house between my two favorite places in the wonderland of poetry. There is the ...

Hey there. Wow. This poem threw me for a loop. I found all these powerful phrases that communicated complete and deeply philosophical concepts, and I myself write a lot of ...

Hello, I feel very sensitive about critiquing this poem, because while I was reading it I searched for its message, its heart, its core, I found clips and pieces from ...

I hope this does not offend, but I thought this pieces was adorable - as in, cute. Splendidly creepy, almost as if the creature was saying- you'll be hunted next, ...

in a header: thought, "this was perfect" never said that before -M never left this sad of a reply hope it means as much to you as for me I'll ...

The subtle change occurs, the line 9/10. A heart hardening whisper, a determination to say goodbye - the past echoing of pain, ruling over the present teasing, tormenting hope. ~*~ ...

SHORT to say - Reading this I felt as if I were looking at an individual through broken, or strangely cut, glass. Horror-breaking within a house of mirrors. It reached ...

Hey there, I liked this. I don't think it was "boring", "cliche", "blah blah blah." Cope-out critiques. That's what's boring. Not helpful to building an instructive, responsive community. I thought ...

Bounce back, clear? You are a dangerous sphinx. You'd write better if you hid less, your riddles can't be answered. Not in the use of imagery, but in what the ...

Hey sistanuuk, S1. I am a hardened lump of play- dough - The small digits reach out that will never grow, that is terrifying to me. Makes chills go down ...

I thought this poem was wonderful. If your age shown is actually real, I'm truly impressed, especially if this is your first sincere try. You have captured a lot of ...