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Mangesh

  • Poetry » General, Supernatural Re: Mirage

    Hello Mirage. This poem is good. It has got good start. Forgive me if I am being rude but I think that the word "mirage" you choose was a mistake ...

    Dec 29, 2013


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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