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Mars

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: -Deleted-

    Hello! So, I think you have a great idea here and I like it, I really only have one problem. And that's the beginning. The first stanza is way too ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Geek Moments

    My geek moment is that the other day, I was just wondering where this thread went. Then I read all the new ones and giggled to myself. face/palm.

    May 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Demeter and Becki need you!

    Yep, I'm in Edinburgh, but only through June. Hopefully everything will work out. :)

    May 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mississippi

    So...I think I'm addicted to your poetry. Seriously. I love this. Everything works wonderfully, especially the Mississippi analogy (metaphor? simile? :P) and coupled with the stanza that's in second p

    May 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Allabis of Seconhand Narcotics

    Hello! You certainly have a way with words, and the way this is set up makes me wonder if you've done prose? If so, I'd like to read it. There ...

    May 4, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: The Crow

    Hello! Before I get into the review, I need to point out that you only have one review; please do another so you can keep up with our 2:1 ratio ...

    May 4, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Deleted!

    Hello! I don't like the lyrics at the beginning. If lyrics are totally necessary (which, honestly, they probably aren't) at least put them in a spoiler or space them out ...

    May 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi ^^ Another Newbie Here.

    Hey EmmaJane! Looks like you've been well briefed already, but I wanted to pop by and alert you to: The Completely Evil Plan! We need as many members as possible, ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Random Nonsense Insult Match!

    (Noun + alliterating verb) X 3 + random word = insult. :D You battery-burning salad-swinging poem-plastering breathmint!

    May 3, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Who wants a ...

    *wants one too* These are so cool. :D EDIT. *changes profile picture* So cool.

    May 1, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hannah's NaPoWriMo Thread; Beyond Silken Birds

    I was engaged to her first. Love. Mars x

    May 1, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rosey's reviews

    Please and thank you!

    Apr 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Report a good member!

    Demeter is my homegirl.

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Terrafertilis Prologue

    Hello! I looked at the blue and black banner before me. I looked down at the legion marching below me , So, right away, this bit is way too repetitive. ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: NaPoWriMo + Chat + Songs from the 90s =

    To the tune of Ice Ice Baby by Vanilla Ice. Alright stop, collaborate and listen: All hail Nate for his great invention! Something keeps us chained to our laptops Postin' ...

    Apr 26, 2009


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— dissonance