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Hey wall flower! Welcome to the site, I'm glad you've posted your poem already :) But, we actually have a rule that you should read and review two other things ...

Hi! Here as requested to shred. I woke up with a start. Someone was watching me. I wasn't sure who and I didn't know why. All I knew was this ...

Hello Gahks! Okay. So, I seriously love this. Not even kidding. It's just the right length, just the right words, it's like a character sketch in poem form. It's a ...

Please don't bump your posts; if you need a review, you can ask for them in the Will Review For Food forum. ;-) Melodiously, you whisper "Melodiously" here is, I ...

Hey! Just popping in to say that I love love love this. I think it works beautifully and the length is definitely good; you got what you wanted to say ...

Hi Daisy, Welcome to YWS! Make sure you check out the Rules - the first and foremost is to do a couple of reviews before you post your own work. ...

Hey Summer! :) The plane ride from New York City to Birmingham, Alabama had only been three hours but to me, it had been a life time. As far as ...

Demeterrrrrrrrr. I feel like I haven't critiqued anything of yours in a really long time - probably because I haven't critiqued anything in a really long time... # 1- Interesting; ...

Heya! On the site we have a rule to keep a 2:1 ratio of reviews to works posted. I see you've done one, but you've posted this and a poem, ...

Hi Chloe. :] This is a nice poem you have here. I like that there is some subtlety here, not just "she has sex which is bad." I especially like ...

Hi! Not boring so much as incredibly pretty, and calm, and soft. I love that this poem paints a picture so that we can see exactly what you're talking about, ...

Hey Shina! I'm sorry this took so long; been sort of swamped lately and out of it, but here I am now and I'll try to give you an extra ...

Hi! there would be good news when Jake called him to tell about his dad being on the news. Extremely pinickity of me - but the repetition of the word ...

Hi Mia! I'm really sorry this took so long, and also, I'm way too lazy to read the other reviews, so forgive if I repeat anything. Quote: “Welcome to our ...

I've never tried a pantoum but they're quite difficult and I think this was a great one. Quote: A star-strung symphony of incoming tide—can you hear? This line, and the ...