MaskedGurl

WOW!! loved it, it was such a cute, happy story. It was great how you wrote it through the eyes of the teddy certainly something i haven't really seen before. ...

thank you, it's hopefully just a little snippet of the story

Hi, I enjoyed reading your story, i love the way you went into detail with what was happening i could picture what was going on in my head as i ...

I really enjoyed reading this, you did a great job well done :)

It's great, it's simple but well written. -MaskedGurl

Alot of people tend to have these same questions, i like it it's beautiful.

alot of people can relate to it, with the fear of roller coasters it's good. Maybe you should expand on it and make it a bigger story.

Great job, i enjoyed reading the poem :)

Thankyou most of what i write is about my experiences and the experiences of those close to me. I'll remember that for next time :)

wow its... wow i can realte to some of what you've written its got alot of emotion great work - MaskedGurl

That's amazing you capture the way a girl yearn to love someone she can't so well

Thankyou,i honestly ddn't think it was that good my moods and different situations inspre what i write about.

It's beautiful,i like the way you have used the seasons to create imergery is amazing i enjoyed reading your poem. - Danielle