Matthemus

i thought it was good, but needed work. you repeated yourself several times, and it was sort of confusing how all of a sudden there is a horrible storm, even ...

Everything Doesn't End Now EDIT: Just a warning..this is somewhat long. Also, there may be parts that seem out of place. This is due to the fact that I am ...

Thanks, it starts out with a more fantasy tone I agree, but my additions take on a more sci-fi tone as it goes.

Hey! So, I've been gone for a long while, being busy with school. Now I am back though, with a story I've had for awhile, but I've rewritten the idea ...

Thanks guys, this was about ten minutes of writing. Good reviews so far I think :) I guess I really do need to describe the land and people more, but ...

Leap from the grass, Up through mountains, Pass the clouds, And touch the sky. Where God is born, And Man would die. - Taylin Littlel ------------------------------------------------- March 28th, 2015

First off, I wish to say that you have a great title, in drew me in almost immediately. I like the idea you have come up with so far, very ...

So I hit a huge snag in the story, havn't felt very inspired . So I figured, "Hey lets put some earlier parts on YWS at 1:30 in the morning." ...

Sorry it took me so long to review! Very busy lately! “Jin, I want you to understand something.” His voice was gentle again as he started to fix my clothes. ...

Thanks guys, I know it wasn't the best, it was more of ideas in a style, then a passage of a story. I know it causes a lot of confusion ...

An idea I came up with a few days ago, not totally developed. I was trying to get across the main idea of the story, but I think i failed ...

Amazing! I have always had a soft spot for samurai stories, and this hit it deep. It compels me to feel the character, and it makes me need more. When ...

The over all idea was good, I enjoy stories like these, I only edited a few pages of this, in the hopes you can get the repeated mistakes corrected yourself. ...

Countless majestic explosions littered the slowly rotating red Agamemnon, a star named after one of the ancient kings of old Earth. The solar winds caused by the explosions lashed out ...

Pin tugged on Mac hard, as gobs of cops lined up around the store. I groaned. Mac began to hesitate. “No one bothers a Recker, kid!’’ He shouted to the ...