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Hey, thanks everyone! *Hands out free cookies* Chapter One: Fury Three days. Three days since Tony had announced to the world that he was Iron Man. Three days Tony had ...

I got Daemon Hall a few months back and read it. And loved it. It was well written and it was a bit different. Instead of just being one story, ...

Hey, Lilyy. This is great. For once in a long while, i don't really have any suggestions. You did wonderfully with the flow and dialogue, and for that i congratulate ...

Wow, you really summed up your dragons pretty good. Nice to see someone so enthusiastic about them, too. I really don't have much to say, except for good job and ...

As far as i know, the book is fairly new. Published either last year or sometime this year. And i think its about how x number of contestants from a ...

Good job, again, Meg! Everyone else beat me to the critiqes! You read this in the club at school, yes? I love it! I'll post mine later (maybe. you know ...

Yay, great job, Meg! Wayyyyy beter than mine! ^.^ -Ariel

Alright. I edited it AGAIN, and so now It runs a bit more smoothly and it has more descriptions. I have chapters two and three up...chapter four soon to come ...

Interesting...but i did catch quite a few mistakes. You may want to go back and reread it. I have to agree with the other two on everything else, so you ...

Yay! Sminks! Haha, that was awesome! I was there when Linds made that word which was pretty funny...the origin she gave for it. Anyways, nice work Aet!

Like i said, first attempt. I didn't expect it to be perfect. :P But thanks Claudette! I'll try and do some of that this weekend.

Thanks. You were right on all of those. I'll fix them right away. ~DM

Everyone before me said it all. For jumping into it, you could easily tell who was good and who was bad. Very interesting. I liked it a lot. I too, ...

yay! i like it! im horrible at writing crits, so i wont bother. But, it did seem a bit confusing...maybe im too tired. anyway...luv it and cant wait to see ...

A very good beginning. Im horrible at writing Crits, but i have to say, i cant wait to read more! Dark Magik~