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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.1

    Hey Harry! I like this chapter a lot, but most of the other reviewers have already said a ton, so this review might be a bit shorter. I'm really liking ...

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Tale of Souls - Chapter Three

    Hey! Back again to review! I enjoyed this chapter a lot, felt very realistic. But once again, it feels more like I reading the meeting report than a novel. I ...

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Tale of Souls - Chapter Two

    Hey! Andrew here to review your piece! Overall it's interesting, and the world seems well built, but I'm not entirely sure what's going on, and I have to agree with ...

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

    Hey! Andrew here to review your chapter. This was a good advancement of the plot, though it felt a bit rushed. I like how we still don't know what's in ...

    Sep 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

    Hey! Andrew here for your review. I really liked this chapter, we really strengthened the friendship (/romantic relationship? The tag is romantic fantasy so I can't help but wonder XD) ...

    Sep 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

    Hey! Andrew here to review your chapter! This chapter really throws us straight into the action, and I'm excited to see where it goes, I hope we do get some ...

    Sep 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)

    Hey, I'm here to review your prologue. I plan to review all the way up to the present chapters and then keep reviewing as they come out, if you think ...

    Sep 1, 2020
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: I'm NOT Sick

    Hey! Andrew here to review. This was interesting, I haven't read much fanfic and I haven't read much of anything in the 2nd person, kinda caught me off guard, but ...

    Aug 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Work in progress

    Hey! Andrew here to review your piece. Overall it's an interesting start. I like the idea of starting what a romance(?), with a part in the future that is very ...

    Aug 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Flash Fiction: Untitled 1

    Hey! Andrew here with your review! This is interesting, quick, and felt kinda poetic in its rhythm. It was a little hard to gauge what was going on because of ...

    Aug 15, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Vyheria: Chapter One

    This is definitely an interesting. The premise is intriguing and the writing is well done. I do agree with stormblessed that it is a bit expositiony, if you know what ...

    Aug 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Harry Potter and the Forgotten Power, Chapter 2.1

    This was interesting, a bit hard to follow, but I liked the format. The first time I read it I didn't even realize it wasn't a magic school, but maybe ...

    Aug 11, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Answering Machine

    This sure is interesting! The method of telling a story about a person from only what other people say too them is interesting! If this is the last piece of ...

    Jul 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Harry Potter and the Forgotten Power, Chapter 1

    Hey Harry! Andrew here for your review. I think this was a fun way to interact with the Harry Potter story. Sci-fi and time travel elements could really be interesting. ...

    Jul 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Behind the Blue Moon - Chapter 1: My Teacher Forced Me To Join A Club - Part 1

    This was a fun read! I don't know a ton about Japanese culture, but my weeb brother and my love of ghibli did help me understand this. Overall the story ...

    Jul 28, 2020


You are in the wrong land even if the roosters recognize you.
— Nathalie Handal, "Noir, une lumière"