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Andrew here with a review! Oooooh we get to see this from daisies point of view now, this is exciting. And maybe I'm wrong, but I can sense a rising ...

Andrew here for a review! Overall, this chapter gives us a bit of info, and is relatively well built. Honestly, sometimes these chapter chunks are so short I don't have ...

Andrew here with a quick review! This chapter is a nice little chill bit after the tension of before. Not a ton happens, besides a trip, we’ve already seen, so ...

Ooooooh forest, trees. Andrew here with a review. This chapter was a good extension of the last one, if a bit anticlimatic (all they got to see was trees? ): ...

WE"RE GUNNA GET TO SEE THE ALEINS WOOOO Ahem I mean, hey, Andrew here with a review! Liked this chapter, and all the jokes riving at current technology. I'm intensely ...

Okay, Andrew here with a review! Before we get into the chapter, I'm going to do a bit of an overall review of the story up to this point, since ...

Andrew here with a review! First off, a story about an event so recent is umm... bold, I'd say. Alternate history is always interesting though. Overall, the grammar and the ...

Andrew here with a review! Oooooh, so much lore... Overall, I liked this chapter, it gives us a lot more ideas to play with, and makes our child characters seem ...

Andrew here with a review! Oh my gosh, this is getting exciting, I think I'll probably review two chapters tonight so I can see what happens next, so many questions ...

Andrew here with a review! A chapter with some actual danger and tension, so that's fun. Aria is likable, Harry is immature but charming for it, and I'm glad to ...

Okay! Andrew here for a review, you're piece was very well written and had very few grammatical mistakes that I could find. Because of this and the fact that most ...

Okay, andrew here, noooow understanding context! This chapter piece confirms the fact this story will be about escaping, gives us some hope, and a place for the plot to go. ...

Helloooooo Andrew here with a real fast review. First off, chapter 2.1 seems to have entirely disappeared, so the context for this is gooone, buuuuuut, here I go anyway! OH ...

Hey, Andrew here with a review! Overall this is a good little piece, if short, brings along the romance a bit, gives us some info. Honestly, I am currently most ...

Andrew here to review your piece! This was a good follow-up on the second one and had that great and terrible feeling of getting to watch our main character be ...