MaybeAndrew

Thanks so much for the review! Sorry for the late reply, I've been so busy I've barely had enough time to write the chapters. But this feedback has been super ...

ARG I JUST WROTE LIKE A 500 word reply and then my internet pppooooofed. Okay, lemme just write it all again: Thanks for the review! I totally agree that this ...

Thanks for the review! You have some real interesting predictions there (; and thank you for reminding me to put a paul quote at the top because I somehow forgot! ...

Yeah, and I want to spread out the knowledge over the story a bit... Maybe I could use quotes from charlies book, like I do from matts dad sometimes, at ...

Thanks a toooon for the review harry! I agree, some of those science paragraphs are in need of editing... but at least they're unediteness mirrors how unedited matts thoughts are ...

Haha, yes, I definetly need to choose a spelling for Destiny's Touch Sorry about that. And I agree, the explanations have been a lot recently. I need to figure out ...

So in summary Science fiction authors: *Make up crazy cool hard to understand space magic filled with plot holes Actual science: Hold My Beer

I was excited for you to read this little explanation. I'll edit those mistakes, and I agree, spirally particular accelerator is a bit dubious and I'm still trying to decide ...

Thanks so much for the review! I will be sure to edit those points.

Thanks for the review harry! This is why I was excited to get you reviewing this story! For the science! First off, I have no idea how I forgot electrons ...

Ignore this little accident

Thanks for the review! I agree that his fears kinda out of the blue, so I might just cut it entirely or change the wording a bit. I'll edit that ...

Thanks so much for the review! And yeah, the wine stane is a bit random, it was just to make him look even dumber when robert finds him, so I ...

Thanks for the review! I will be sure to edit those points!

Thanks again for the review Malice! I'm glad you liked the physics description, I've been slaving over those and some more to come for the past week XD, it's hard ...