MaybeAndrew

Thank you so much for the review! I%u013Al be sure to edit those points! Maybe this is what bugs me the most. The feeling of a tribe/village that the best ...

As always malice, a great review! Thank you so much! I agree that paragraph needs editing, I'll try to figure that out.

Thanks so much! I'll be sure to tag you when the next chapter comes out!

Thanks so much for the review! Sorry for the late thanks, notifications got away from me!

Thanks so much for the review! I literally changed my mind in editing so that's a symptom of that XD! I'll be sure to edit those mistakes!

Thaaaanks so much for the reveiw! I'll be sure to edit all of those points. Yeah, the name of this whole stories actually getting close XD, I only planned for ...

Thanks so much for the review! I agree the titles need editing to make it more meaningful, Do you mean Southern American like in Latin American or as in South ...

Thanks so much for the review! I agree the beginning of the chapter needs some editing! I'll get on that!

Thanks for the review harry! Agree the transitions rushed, and I'll work on fixing that. Yeah, so far this whole book has been building Matt up just so I can ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'll be sure to edit those mistakes. Nice to see an alliteration in the title. I'm glad, because I've actually decided now all chapter ...

Thank you so so much Malice! I'll be sure to edit all of those mistakes, and yeah, I guess I should clarify that I mean staking up the nuclear arnsal ...

Thank you so much for the review harry! I'll be sure to edit those mistakes. Its good to see he hasn't gone overboard with being a little douchey and become ...

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, I'm excited to see future reviews from you!

Alliyah over here being a good samaritan. This is what makes our site run

Real quick, I'm curious, if I did a complete cut to like 2 weeks after this in the next chapter, and not really cover what happens in between. To give ...