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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Bully

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. The poem raises a concern which is not usually raised in poems. Even though it's a personal experience, it can be ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If I had called the leaders to accountability.

    Hello there. Sorry, I didn't see this poem before. But now I am here to review. And I hope to give a fair one. First of all, I want to ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: in your absence

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. And hope that it is helpful. First of all I would say that I haven't reviewed anything like this yet, so ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mermaid

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. But before that I am confused that why aren't others reviewing or commenting. Are they saving this masterpiece for tomorrow? Well ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: What Would You Do?

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. And hope that I can be of help. What I liked— I haven't done a review on such a poem yet. ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    Hello there. I will try to give a fair review. The first line is simple but effective. It makes so much sense and it somewhat forces the reader to imagine ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Literature Re: Earth's Child- Chapter 1

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. What I liked— First of all the lines — 'The ability that everyone wanted to have, just wishing it would be ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Tendrils of Angst

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. The poem is short, not that it is any problem, but that means my review is gonna be short too. I ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: To you, From me.

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. YWS review sandwich style. What I liked— I really liked the third stanza. Doing italic 'your' word was good work. I ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: new glasses

    Hello there. Just gonna give a review. It's personal thing for you, so I am not gonna say anything much. Also, you have cleared what was unclear through your reply ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blissful Abyss

    Hello there. I hope to give you a fair review. YWS review sandwich style!!!! What I liked— I personally like rhyming poems, and this one was that. The poem is ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: the day i spoke my mind

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. Trying to do the YWS review sandwich for the first time. What I liked— I really liked that the poem is ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: City That Dreams

    Hello there. I believe I can do a better review (even though I don't live in Mumbai, but hey, I live in Delhi!) I agree to the person who said ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: fierce and proud

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. I don't know much about fantasy poems. So it is just a short review. The last line of first stanza seems ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: You are your hope

    Hello there. I hope to give a fair review. The concept is good, even if common. But some words were not clear, like 'darkness chambers'. Did you mean dark chambers ...

    Jan 26, 2017


Very well; I hear; I admit, but I have a voice too, and for good or evil mine is the speech that cannot be silenced.
— Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness