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Re: Chapter 18.1: Ilami
Hey Light! Back again as always. :) Small things The first thing I noticed is that in the first sentence, you didn't refer to Ilami by name, and that confused ...
Jun 11, 2018 -
Re: The Other Side Of Paradise [March short story]
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today, since it's been a while and this hasn't gotten any reviews yet. I thought this was really sweet. ...
Jun 10, 2018 -
Re: KIA - Episode 2 (Tragedy of Mrs. Evans)
Hey, back again! EDGAR - I'm only scared for your well-being. It's complicated enough that you were genetically designed; with all the action you get yourself into..... KIA - It ...
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: KIA - Episode 1 (Now Rises KIA)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Apologies if I repeat anything the previous reviewer has said, as I only skimmed through their review. Overall, ...
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: I Exist [February short story]
Hey there, SimpleBicycle! Welcome to YWS! I thought this looked really interesting, so I figured I'd drop by to review it. First off, I love, love how smoothly you introduce ...
Jun 3, 2018 -
Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 3
Hey there, Cyr! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. Sorry, I'm jumping in without having read previous parts. So, I *love* your description here. The city ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: Evol Cerebro Stopidosis
Hey there, Okra! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today in these final minutes of Review Day! First off, I want to say how much I love ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Crystal Clear Chapter 1 (again)
Hey there, izanami! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely review day. Strong legs clad in black leggings bounced up and down like on a ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Of Chickens in Italy
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day, and we'll see if I can build upon Cadi's already excellent review. I really enjoyed ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Malgrave
Hey lelu! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely Review Day. Overall, I think my favorite thing about this chapter is Briar's strong character voice, and ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Dreams into Reality Ch. 1.1
Hey there, Kanome! I saw that this is lingering at the back of the Green Room and thought I'd go ahead and give it a quick review this fine Review ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Moonlight: Chapter Five
Hey there Danni! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this lovely review day. :D Let's start with the positives! You have a lot of good stuff ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: The Illusion of Creation: Chapter 2
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review this lovely review day. :) Overall, this is really interesting! One of the things that really grabbed me was ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 17.2: Gael
Hey Light! Back again. This is another great chapter. Both Gael and Veris' dialogue feels natural and in-character. I'm still slightly suspicious of Veris, but a lot less than I ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Missing My Father, in Five Stages.
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and leave a quick review this fine review day. The first think I wanted to say is your opening two paragraphs had me ...
May 27, 2018