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Hey, felistia. Meerkat here with a five-critiques-in-one mega review thingy we discussed. It's in spoiler tags, due to the length. Here goes! Chapter Two: The setting is good, with some ...

Hi, felistia. It's Meerkat here to review. This was a creative idea for a poem, to follow the cycle of water as it moves and changes upon the earth. It ...

Hi, ChocolateCello. I'm Meerkat. I like the tone of your poem; it's slightly humorous with a nice little rhyme scheme. You asked for some help with the flow, though, and ...

Hi, writer12345! It's Meerkat here, reviewing as requested. I don't want too start off too harshly, but you have a lot of spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes in this story. ...

Hello, EternalRain. Meerkat here for reviewing, as asked! Beginning: Especially for novels, the first sentence (well, the first whole chapter, really) is vital. I feel that you could have started ...

Hey, janarose. Meerkat here to review. While I usually begin with grammar and punctuation, I believe TriSARAHtops pretty much covered the main issue: unnecessary commas and rambling sentences that nee

Hi, leslieloo. Meerkat here for a review. I usually begin with grammar, spelling, punctuation, and all that. Let's get started! -I couldn't find any spelling errors, which is great. -There ...

Hey, it's Meerkat here for a review. I read chapter one, so I hope I'm caught up. Firstly, let's deal with grammar, spelling, etc: -"twirl-o-wirl" should be spelled "whirl." -"on ...

Hey, felistia. It's Meerkat here with a review. I usually start off with spelling, grammar, punctuation, etcetera, so let's get that out of the way. Others reviewers have mentioned some ...

Hello, I'm Meerkat here to review this story. This was really interesting almost from the very beginning. Your writing style has a kind of leading quality that flows from one ...

Hello, Meerkat here with a review. This was a really clever framing device for a poem, your connection to reflections in a window. The narrator of the work (you?) conveyed ...

Hello Dracula, it's Meerkat here with a review. As far as source material for Sherlock and Doctor Who goes, I'm more of a old-series fan myself (4th Doctor, Arthur Conan ...

Hello, InfiniteRectangles! This was a good story, and improved from The Beggar Boy. You mentioned there would be more to this tale, and I am eager to see where it ...

Hi, I'm Meerkat here with a review. Great short story, may I say right off the bat. I really liked the sort of Sixth Sense-ish vibe it had; "person who ...

Hi, I'm Meerkat. For a poem about not knowing how to describe love, it certainly expresses emotion very well. Some minor edits are to capitalize i's, as well as the ...