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Re: Love-Lies-Bleeding
Hey, PrincessInk! Scythe here for a quick review! :D I loved this! It was so well written and the imagery was ever so beautiful — I adored how you included ...
Mar 21, 2017 -
Re: staring/reaching/finding
Hey, Button! Scythe here for a quick review. I liked what you did, comparing the person to the statues and making her seem depressed—Still and motionless. You almost made her ...
Mar 21, 2017 -
Re: Vietnam- A Poem
Hey, AkeliaTaske! Scythe here for a quick review :) First of all, Wow! This was beautiful, you are clearly passionate about this subject. There are various poets who have covered ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: That Damn Smirk
Hey, vluvswriting! Scythe here for a quick review :) I loved the deep and sensual tone of this poem, it was so husky and shown the masculinity of the male. ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: Play Pretend
Hey, Remembrance! ScytheMeister here for a quick review :) I really liked this poem, it was precise and relatable for the majority of us readers. I loved the use of ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: As Time Goes On
Hey, SarukaTheHuman! ScytheMeister here for a quick review :) I loved this poem, especially where you have used Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow to represent the persons out-look and how it ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: The Garden Where your Love Grows
Hey, TheUnknownWriter! ScytheMeister here for a quick review :) This was beautiful, so romantic and passionate. I loved it! The way you tied in flowers and nature was mesmerising and ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Like concrete and lead
Hey, AngelBunnyroll! Scythe here for a quick review :) Wow! This is amazing, I loved every word. It was so in-depth and emotional, almost like the real person was spilling ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Life As Poet
Hey, royevans! ScytheMeister here for a quick review :) This was a good poem, it started off good and has a great potential but some of it didn't really make ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: The Moon
Hey, 20JPorter! ScytheMeister here to review :) This was a good poem, I like what you've done with the relationship between the sun and the moon. We all know the ...
Mar 16, 2017 -
Re: Drinking a glass of water ...
Hey, DrFeelGood! ScytheMeister here for a quick review :D First of all, Haha! Whilst reading, I did imagine this as some kind of joke/humorous piece, until the last line of ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Flesh
Hey, Thepape24! It's ScytheMeister here for a quick review :D First of all, this was a good poem. I loved what you attempted with the repetition of the sounds: "I" ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Demolition Lovers
Hey, TheStormAroundMe! It's ScytheMeister here for a quick review :D Firstly, Wow! This is a great poem, I loved how real and relatable it was. The way you wrote was ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Hello
Hey, insertwordshere! ScytheMeister here for a quick review ^-^ I loved how you used mathematics to in this, however, I felt like the poem itself needs a little more work. ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Pain
Hey, Mockingjay78! It's ScytheMeister here for a quick review :) This was a great poem. I loved how you have used physical pain to present the emotional pain behind this ...
Mar 14, 2017
